Friday, May 29, 2009

Untitled

The scream ended as abruptly as it had begun. So abruptly, in fact, that the intruder guessed no one else in the house had really even heard it. He tossed his victim back on the couch, swiped a hand across his mouth and stared, with obvious adoration, at the blood smeared on his knuckles; a vicious grin broke over his face.

He moved on. Silent. Swift. Deadly.

Vampire.

****

Officer Gentry entered the basement of the Mitchell home and was immediately hit by the scent of decay. No one had heard from the Mitchell family in almost a week, and eventually a concerned neighbor phoned the station. Gentry arrived to find the front doors locked and the windows shut, blinds drawn – but on closer inspection he’d found the basement hatch slightly ajar. He radioed for his rookie partner who was still sitting in the squad car out front. He just couldn’t go in alone. He didn’t know why. After all the horrible accidents he’d witnessed, the aftermath of domestic violence, the shootings he’d been called to, all the blood he’d seen in his 21 years on the force, something about this one made his toes curl even before he gained entrance to the house. Miller arrived in short order and the two of them crept into the basement, guns drawn.

Cautious. Eyes darting this way and that. On alert.

Miller called Gentry’s attention to how the earthen basement floor seemed churned up, like someone had made a hasty attempt to bury something. In fact, Officer Gentry thought this wasn’t really much of a basement, more like a root cellar; a strange sight in this suburban neighborhood of concrete slab, cookie-cutter houses. Gentry and Miller let their eyes adjust to the blackness and then made their way over to uneven wooden steps that they could only guess led to the main level of the house.

Wanting to get out of this odd basement, with its heavy, dry smell, Gentry and Miller mounted the steps and ascended. Just a few short steps later, they arrived in the kitchen. Neat. Tidy. Someone obviously took great care to maintain it; not a dish out of place. Gentry wondered if his own, small, bachelor kitchen would ever look this good, finally deciding that it would not.

On the far end of the kitchen was another doorway, an arch leading into a dim hall. At the end of the hall Gentry could see the front door; muted sunlight filtering in through the sheers hung on either side of the door on the long floor-to-ceiling accent windows. Something wasn’t right and Gentry knew it.

Miller felt it too. He laid a hand on Gentry’s shoulder and after a quick glance at one another, and a curt nod, they crossed the kitchen to the hallway. Almost as soon as they left the kitchen they were assaulted by the scent of death. Gentry knew it instinctively and Miller would soon learn. Putting a hand out to stop Miller from proceeding any further, his first instinct being to protect his partner, Gentry gestured for Miller to stay put.

Gentry could smell it. He didn’t really need to see it. But, he needed to know. He needed to have something to report when he radioed HQ for assistance, the mobile crime unit, the ME, the coroner...whomever.

The simple, yet somehow lonely, staircase to the second floor was on his right. A solid wall of framed family photographs was on his left, and Miller was behind him, crouched low to the polished hardwood floor in the doorway between the hall and the kitchen. Gentry, too, crouched low and proceeded forward in an awkward waddle, occasionally finding it necessary to touch the floor with his left hand to steady himself and avoid falling over. He needed to lose this gut; it was getting in the way of his police work.

At the front door, the dining room was to Gentry’s left and the living room was to his right, just past the landing of the staircase. It was to the living room Gentry now turned. He could see no one immediately, so he straightened up from his crouch, groaning knees thanking him creakily, and put his back to the wall at the bottom of the staircase. Slowly, oh-so-slowly, Gentry peeked around the corner into the living room and saw, splayed there on the couch in a jumble of gray and sagging flesh, was Mr. Mitchell.

Gentry stood straight and walked back to where Miller was still crouching.

“It’s not good, Miller. Go back to the car and call it in, I’m going to search the rest of the house. There are four people in this family and Mr. Mitchell is the only one in the living room. Where the other three are, I don’t know. And, Miller? Don’t go in there, eh?”

Gentry unlocked the front door and let Miller out, leaving the door open for air, then he turned to the staircase and started up.

It was a simple house. Kitchen, living room, dining room, and half bath on the first floor, two bedrooms and a full bath upstairs; same as every other house in this neighborhood. And it was neat as a pin. Not a picture crooked, not a speck of dust to be seen. Peering into the bedroom at the top of the stairs, Gentry saw two small forms, splayed in a similar fashion to Mr. Mitchell downstairs; skin gray and hollow. Poor kids, Gentry thought. He couldn’t tell how old they were, but was sure they were both under ten; brothers sharing a room.

In the small master bedroom, everything was tidy. The bed made, the curtains perfectly spaced, the items on top of the dresser arranged meticulously, closet door closed tight. He didn’t see Mrs. Mitchell and Gentry breathed a sigh of relief. He really didn’t want to see her body splayed and gray like her husband and kids. As soon as that sigh escaped his lips, however, he heard a low moan from the far side of the bed. Gentry’s head snapped in the direction of the sound and in one leap he was across the room, holstering his weapon and crouching down toward Mrs. Mitchell who lay in a heap, pale and bloody, between the bed and the window. She was unconscious, as far as Gentry could tell, but still had a weak pulse. He radioed Miller in the squad car and told him to get an ambulance here right away.

TBC...

(c) JMS - May 2009

Thursday, May 14, 2009

New Challenge...

So I was sitting here thinking, "we need a new challenge for the KWC..."

Being the lazy little girl that I am, I was waiting for someone else to post it. But, I am most likely the least busy of everyone in this group - I don't have kids, or a real job, my significant other is over seas - so I guess I can do some work, too.

So, the new challenge is:
(Can I get a drum roll here? Oh... we don't pay for that service? Ok, readers, lightly beat your hands upon your desk or chair or whatever is around you before you read the next sentence.)

Take a line from your favorite short story, poem, or novel. Just one line. It can be a sentence, dialogue, a description, or whatever. You will start your work with that one line, then build something after it. This can be a poem or a short story.

Go for it!!!

I miss Knoxville... Keep it warm for me guys...

Monday, March 23, 2009

New Challenge!

This is an idea I totally stole from Allen Wier.
I'll pick a picture and you create a story surrounding it...
For instance, if I were to show this picture, you would write a story about how the men became friends, or what they were laughing about, or why Richard Ford is trying to undress George Garrett, etc. Get it?

The greatest thing about this writing idea, is that it rarely produces the same type of stories!
I'm deadlining it on April 1st, but seeing as how I never hit the deadlines, I'll be very lenient. And as for the picture...

Have fun!

Friday, March 6, 2009

The Next Adventure

I remember the last time I felt this way. It was so long ago, but you make me remember it…

The red bike I secretly desired for so long under the Christmas tree; small, bright lights winking off its paint and chrome, more beautiful in life than in dreams. No training wheels!

This special, wonderful gift for me!

My touch was reverent, my soul calmed, my head kept a mantra of, “Mine, thank you, mine, oh lord, thank you, mine…”

Later that afternoon… so scared, so terrified of falling; my palms slipped from the handlebars, but only a few times. “What if I get hurt?” I remember my mother’s voice, “Then we’ll fix you up and you’ll try again!”

My heart pounding with such a force I barely heard my father’s instructions, “Keep your head up, eyes in front of you- no, don’t look back at us; we’re right behind you.”

The shaking fears of correcting, over correcting, trying to steer without looking… then how did it happen? I was good at this!
For a moment I was so sure I’d been riding forever. A pothole ahead; I braced down, tightened my hold, held my breath and jarred over it. Still smooth sailing…

The sun was harsh that day, but warmed my skin- The wind kicked enough to shudder the bike beneath me, but it blew my hair wild. I was wild! A new person, it seemed.

This was freedom! This was the promise of adventure!

Yes… I remember the last time I felt this way. And here you are in front of me, my husband. You say, “I do”, and your touch is reverent. My soul is yours but in my head I say, “Mine, thank you, mine, oh lord, thank you, mine…”


Oh, my love- What an adventure we will have together!





~(c) Sunday's Peral, March 2009

Monday, March 2, 2009

Untitled - Feeling Challenge

I opened my eyes early that day. Something felt wrong; out of place; repressive. It was pain, hovering in the air like smoke after a raging fire.

I vaguely remember going about my morning routine; dazed and waiting for the oppressiveness surrounding me to lift.

After a while, the screaming started. She was near the end now, and though no one thought to tell me, instinctively, I knew.

I was not allowed to see her and was even ushered off to the last day of my freshman year of high-school to wait for news impatiently – knowing the news could only mean one thing.

I was so numb. I only have impressions of that morning like the phone ringing in homeroom asking the teacher to send me down to the office with all my things. The security guard who walked me back to my locker to clean it out for the summer. Being picked up out in the front of the school by an uncle who had just come in with my grandmother, the night before.

And then I was home again. The oppressive feeling had not lifted, but changed dramatically. It was not pain hovering now, but death; breathing down the necks of the living still occupying my house, which seemed to have been turned into a dark and silent tomb.

...unfinished work...

~ (c) JMS, February 2009

Thursday, February 19, 2009

As written to my son on 2/17/09:

My dearest Jacob,
You turned 6 years old today. I am so proud of you, and all that you are. I'm proud of all that you're yet to be.
I remember the day you were born as though it were yesterday. Your Daddy looked at me and said, with tears in his eyes, "how is it possible to love someone so much, who we've never known at all?" How indeed. And today, as you turn yet another year older, I ask myself how it's possible to love you any more today, than I did yesterday. Yet I do. You simply fill my heart with all that is good.
Tonight we sat at your favorite restaurant and laughed. And again I thought of when you were born. I looked in your eyes then and tried to imagine you as a little boy, later, as a grown man. Tonight you looked at me with those eyes and smiled. Without a single word, you smiled and hugged me. Then you said, "Thanks, Mom."
I looked at our family, sitting at the table. There was me, Daddy, Little Brother James, and you.
I sighed contently and thought, "How blessed am I?"
And I just looked back at you, hugged you and said, "No, Jacob. Thank you."

So, my dear boy, in the years ahead, when the hustle and bustle of life has you down, I hope you can take these words and be reminded of how very much you are loved. Remember Son, that when God gave you to me, my life changed forever. I became a mom that day. Not just any mom; your mom. And that may very well have been the best day of my life.

Happy Birthday, Jacob. I love you.

New Writing Challenge for February 2009

OK - I've been thinking long and hard about the next challenge. So far, we've done a lot of 3-4 page stories about all kinds of things and I've been trying to figure out a way to shake things up a bit.

I thought about poetry, but, though I do love it - I truly struggle with it at this stage in my life. I keep reverting to rhyme and I feel childish and uncreative. That's not to say that poems that rhyme are bad or anything, but I want them to be something more; make you think.

So...no poetry right now.

That said, I think I've figured out what to do.

Let's write about something that makes you feel. It doesn't really matter, but whatever you write about should make you (and more specifically, the reader) FEEL SOMETHING. Try to convey how "whatever-it-is" makes you feel well enough so that the reader can experience the same joy, sadness, peace, frustration, anger...whatever. Emotions are pretty strong things and I think it can be rather difficult to convey them to others in a way that they can understand, or at least empathize with, exactly what you are going through.

Oh - and this "story" should be no longer than 1 page long. That would be 1 page of regular type in a regular Word document (or whatever word processing program you use). Make sense?

Let's try to get the stories in by next Friday, February 27th.

Email the final products to knoxwritingclub@gmail.com and they will be posted. When you submit, please make note of how we usually differentiate who wrote what (eg: (c) JMS, February 2009) and be aware that your name will be used unless you specify otherwise!

Anyone can contribute and we encourage those wishing to test the writing waters to get their feet wet.

Good luck and looking forward to seeing what comes of this!

TTFN
JMS